Our Class Paragraph--Weaser

Weaser (1st draft)

     My dog Weaser is a Jack Russell. He likes to do a lot of tricks. When he does army crawl I laugh. His legs shuffle and wiggle. He jumps through my arms. We taught him well ourselves. Weaser likes to do tricks and I like to watch him. 

Weaser (2nd draft)

     I never thought I would own a dog like Weaser who is a smart and amazing Jack Russell! Tricks are my favorite thing to do with him. When he does army crawl I burst out hysterically laughing. His legs shuffle and wiggle and his booty shakes back and forth. He leaps through my arms like a deer through the field. Jumping is my favorite thing to do with him. Weaser likes to do tricks and I love to watch him because he gives me good feelings in my tummy.